Thursday, May 10, 2012

helpful critque

People who say what they think about Duncan, for real.

Brenna - [don't be a hero. there is no afterlife. don't sacrifice a whole family - institution is made for him. on the other hand and at the very least, have times when his door is locked: a schedule.]
Cecilia - [you let him get away with it. you shouldn't let him have a drink unless he is supervised.]
Ardene - [he has to clean up for himself, even if you come back to it later and again and again. It has to be him]



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